Second Draft

This is the second draft of my magazine front cover, contents page and double page spread. As you can see from the first draft, the front cover especially has been altered a lot. I decided to use the long shot image of Molly because it looked more like a magazine cover. I also made the LOUD text larger so it is obvious that this is the name of the magazine. I used yellow text for the most important parts of the magazine to stand out the most.















The contents page has also been altered slightly but still contains white space which I know can be filled so that the page looks more busy and interesting to the audience.













The double-page spread has been altered a lot too, I think it looks more professional because it contains a large article on the right side and a smaller article on the left. I used the original cover photo for the double-page spread because I felt that it did not look like much of a cover photo.